Does the type of car a person drives tell us about the person who drives it?

2013-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Yes, I agree. Specially in case of Korea, many man have a dream owning a car because Cars are not just means of transportation. They are means of appealing the one's wealth, capabilities and tastes to others, which fuction as fashion. Thus, car industires provide variety kinds of cars to satisfy customers' various desires.

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Hi there!   Thank you for doing your homework. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I\'m so happy because you\'re always doing a great job. Take care always ^^,   Sincerely, [이름]   Yes, I agree. >>CORRECTSpecially in case of Korea, many man have a dream owning a car because Cars are not just means of transportation. >>Specially in case of Korea, many men have a dream of owning a car because cars are not just a means of transportation. They are means of appealing the one\'s wealth, capabilities and tastes to others, which fuction as fashion. >>They are means of appealing one\'s wealth, capabilities and tastes to others, which functions as some kind of fashion. Thus, car industires provide variety kinds of cars to satisfy customers\' various desires. >>[variety is a synonym of kinds; you can choose one] or [you may also say \"various types\"] >>Thus, car industry or automotive industry(better) provide varieties of cars to satisfy customer\'s various desire.

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