Does the way that information is communicated today result in people learning less than ever before?
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I agree that the way that information is communicated today result in people learning less than ever before.
As the development of internet, we don't need to remember all the information. In my opinion, looking is not learning. These days we can "look" a lot of information through the internet and SNS. However after turn it off we don't remember that we search and read.
It is not our fault. In the era of the flood of information, there are too many information to remember and it is exceed our brain capacity. So our brains are getting hard. Because of this, we learn less than ever before.
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A great Monday to you [이름]! (^^,)
How are you so far?
Thank you for once again writing in our composition board.
I am really amazed with your dedication to learn and study the English language.
I love it when you write here because everytime you do, I always get the chance to reflect on things as well.
Thank you! ^^
Technology is a double-edged sword.
It has its advantages and disadvantages.
Because of our highly developed technology, we are able to access a lot of information with just one click in the internet.
The internet is very accessible and convenient to everybody. It is probably one of the greatest inventions of all time.
However, because of the internet, the attention span of most people nowadays is shortening.
A lot of children are getting reluctant to study and learn because of the influence of internet and lack of reading in the home.
Children prefer to surf the internet rather than read.
Perhaps this is the reason why inspite of the advanced technology we have today, a lot of people are uneducated even if they have the means to go to school.
You were right when you said looking is not learning.
To learn, you have to focus and provide attention to what your are trying to learn.
There you have it [이름]! ^^Thank you very much for this reflection. I hope you\'ve also learned something out of this composition.
See you again tomorrow. Good day and God bless!
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I agree that the way that information is communicated today result in people learning less than ever before.
>> I agree to the opinion that people are learning less than ever before because of the way information is communicated today.
OR >> I agree to the opinion that people are learning less than ever before because of the way information is conveyed today.
As the development of internet, we don\'t need to remember all the information.
>> Because of the development of internet, people don\'t need to remember all of the informations anymore.
In my opinion, looking is not learning.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In my point of view, looking is not the same with learning.
These days we can \"look\" a lot of information through the internet and SNS.
>> These days, we can \"look\" for a lot of information through the internet and SNS.
However after turn it off we don\'t remember that we search and read.
>> However, the moment that we log out, we don\'t remember the things that we searched for and read about.It is not our fault.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This shouldn\'t be blamed on us.
In the era of the flood of information, there are too many information to remember and it is exceed our brain capacity.
>> In the era of having an overload of information, the informations that we get are too excessive that it\'s almost impossible for us to remember everything.
So our brains are getting hard.
>> Our brains are overloaded with information, giving most of us a hard time.
Because of this, we learn less than ever before.
>> Because of this, we learn lesser than before.
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