Does the weather affect your mood? How do rainy days make you feel? (Homework)
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Ah, me too, [이름]!
In my case, I feel irritated when it rains ;(
I hate walking under the rain.
However, I like it when I am home^^
Too much sunlight makes my head painful TT
Yes, the weather affect my mood.
>>Yes, the weather affects my mood.
Accoring to many researchers, they have shown that there is a relationship between the weather and the mood.
>>According to many researchers, they have shown that there is a relationship between the weather and the mood.
People will feel good on sunny days and try to work hard more.
>>People feel good on sunny days and try to work harder.
But, on rainy days, their ability of the work will be reduced because it makes us gloomy.
>>But, on rainy days, their ability to work will be reduced because it makes them gloomy.
I think so.
>>CORRECT!
Also, in my case, I have to take umbrella to go outside on rainy days.
>>Also, in my case, I have to take an umbrella to go outside on rainy days.
However, It makes me troublesome because I should have one more burden.
>> However, it is very troublesome because I should have one more burden.
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