Does the weather affect your mood? Please explain.
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My mood is affected by weather. Especially, I feel a lot worse on a rainy day than sunny day when I go to the math academy in weekend. It doesn\'t mean that I hate a rainy day. Actually, I like to see the rain inside on the bed, not outside. However, when I have to go out, I don\'t like the rain because it\'s awkward and clammy so I can\'t move easily as usually I do. Furthermore, I have to bring my umbrella to shut out the rain. That\'s why I feel bad on a rainy day. In contrast, I feel happy even if I don\'t do anything that makes me happy on a sunny day. I want to go out anywhere and I have full of hope in my thoughts. Even if It\'s the day I go to the academy. The weather is important for me about mood change. Even so, sometimes I feel worse on a sunny day when I go to school on monday....because I can\'t get out in school.
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Hey Sarah! Thank you for sharing your opinion about this topic. I guess weather does have a huge impact on our moods.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
My mood is affected by weather.
>> My mood is affected by the weather.
Especially, I feel a lot worse on a rainy day than sunny day when I go to the math academy in weekend.
>> Especially, I feel a lot worse on a rainy day than on a sunny day when I go to the math academy on the weekend.
It doesn\'t mean that I hate a rainy day.
>> It doesn\'t mean that I hate rainy days.
Actually, I like to see the rain inside on the bed, not outside.
>> Actually, I like to see the rain from indoors, especially when I\'m in bed.
However, when I have to go out, I don\'t like the rain because it\'s awkward and clammy so I can\'t move easily as usually I do.
>> However, when I have to go out, I don\'t like the rain because it\'s awkward and clammy, making it difficult for me to move as easily as I usually do.
Furthermore, I have to bring my umbrella to shut out the rain.
>> Furthermore, I have to bring my umbrella to shield myself from the rain.
That\'s why I feel bad on a rainy day.
>> That\'s why I feel bad on a rainy day.
In contrast, I feel happy even if I don\'t do anything that makes me happy on a sunny day.
>> In contrast, I feel happy even if I don\'t do anything that usually makes me happy on a sunny day.
I want to go out anywhere and I have full of hope in my thoughts.
>> I want to go anywhere, and my thoughts are full of hope,
Even if It\'s the day I go to the academy.
>> even if it\'s the day I go to the academy.
The weather is important for me about mood change.
>> The weather is important to me in terms of mood change.
Even so, sometimes I feel worse on a sunny day when I go to school on monday....because I can\'t get out in school.
>> Even so, sometimes I feel worse on a sunny day when I go to school on Monday because I can\'t get out of school.
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