Does the weather affect your mood? Please explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
The weather obviously affect people\'s mood and atmosphere of life .
I don\'t know why, however, we all know this.
These days in Korea, the cherry blossom is blooming, so many Koreans feel happy mood.
강사 첨삭
Het [이름]! I\'ve heard about those cherry blossoms as well and how they are improving a lot of people\'s moods these days.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
The weather obviously affect people\'s mood and atmosphere of life .
>>The weather obviously affects people\'s mood and the atmosphere of life.
I don\'t know why, however, we all know this.
>>I don\'t know why, but we all know this.
These days in Korea, the cherry blossom is blooming, so many Koreans feel happy mood.
>>These days in Korea, the cherry blossoms are blooming, so many Koreans are in a happy mood.
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