Does true loyalty require unconditional support?

2015-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I don't agree that true loyalty requires unconditional support. I think if he/her have a true loyalty, he/her have to say right things even if it is not good to hear. the Sweet talk is good to hear at that moment, but after some accident happened, the leader realizes that tell the truth is better than sweet talk. Yes, to survive in this rough society, it is necessary to say the sweet talk and to do unconditional support. But to make a good society, someone needs to say right word and sometimes if he/her believe that the leader's decision is not right, he/her have to express refusal to the leader. But in particular, the situation such as in Army or in the doctor society, it is better to do unconditional support. Because they have to obey the leader's word to set a discipline.

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 Hi, [이름]! ^^A wonderful Tuesday to you my dear. How are you doing today? I hope you\'re fine and everything is going smoothly for you. I agree with you when you said, loyalty does not necessarily require unconditional support. Sometimes, we have to be very assertive and careful with whom we should be giving out our loyalty to. In addition to that, before giving out unconditional support,  we should also weigh if the decision made by a person in a situation conincides with our core values. I could clearly see that you have taken your time to answer this assignment. I hope you have a wonderful day [이름]! See you again tomorrow. Take care always and God bless. ~Teacher Charry~ I don\'t agree that true loyalty requires unconditional support. >> CORRECT! OR >> I don\'t agree with the idea that true loyalty requires unconditional support. I think if he/her have a true loyalty, he/her have to say right things even if it is not good to hear. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think if a person has to give his/ her unconditional loyalty to another person, he/she has to always agree even if it\'s not right anymore. the Sweet talk is good to hear at that moment, but after some accident happened, the leader realizes that tell the truth is better than sweet talk. >> It\'s good to listen to sweet talk at that moment, but after an accident or an unfortunate event happens, the leader realizes that truth is better than sweet talk. Yes, to survive in this rough society, it is necessary to say the sweet talk and to do unconditional support. >> Yes, in order to survive in this rough society, it is necessary to do the sweet talk and show unconditional support. But to make a good society, someone needs to say right word and sometimes if he/her believe that the leader\'s decision is not right, he/her have to express refusal to the leader. >> But in order to come up with a good form of society, someone needs to stand up tell the truth; and if he/she believes that the leader\'s decision is not right, he/she will openly oppose the leader. But in particular, the situation such as in Army or in the doctor society, it is better to do unconditional support. Because they have to obey the leader\'s word to set a discipline. >> But in particular situations such as being in an army or in a dictatorial society, it is better to show unconditional support because the leader actually sets the laws.

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