Does violence in movies and on television inspire violence in real life?
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I think age restriction for film is good effective.
Because age retriction for film is protect to children.
When I watching movie and television, I will promise age retriction for film.
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I think age restriction for film is good effective.
>> I think age restriction in films is effective.
Because age retriction for film is protect to children.
>> Because age restriction in films protects children from watching violence.
When I watching movie and television, I will promise age retriction for film.
>> When I watch movies and television, I follow the age restriction in films.
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