Does your country celebrate a special event to commemorate senior citizens?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, but small event it is commemorate senior citizens day it\'s a day to respect the commemorate senior citizens.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s another corrected composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good evening there!
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Does your country celebrate a special event to commemorate senior citizens?
Yes, but small event it is commemorate senior citizens day it\'s a day to respect the commemorate senior citizens.
>>> Yes, but it\'s only a small event called Senior Citizens Day, which is a day to respect and commemorate senior citizens.
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