Does your country have a good education system? What are its strengths and weaknesses?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, my country have a good education system. The advantage can learn several things with electronic devices. The disadvantage is too difficult to test problems.
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes, my country have a good education system.
>>> Yes, my country has a good education system.
The advantage can learn several things with electronic devices.
>>> CORRECT!
The disadvantage is too difficult to test problems.
>>> CORRECT!
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