Does your country have a good education system? What are its strengths and weaknesses?
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Korean education system is high top class and quality of it also high. OECD research says that Korean students study most among that member country,which is 8 hours a day. So it is true that we study a lot and have many ways, opportunity to get study. But everything it is about efficiency. Koreans spend 8 hours 55 minutes in studying math which is higher than the smartest country Finland. But at (PISA· Program for International Student Assessment)
Koreans got 542 points which is lower than Finland\'s(544 points). Again to the point, Korea has a high quality and there are many chances to study. However, Some experts criticize the efficiency of study and not having enough time for self-directed learning.
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Korean education system is high top class and quality of it also high.
>>> The Korean education system is high top class and the quality of it also high.
OECD research says that Korean students study most among that member country,which is 8 hours a day.
>>> The OECD research says that Korean student’s study most among that numbers in country,
which is 8 hours a day.
So it is true that we study a lot and have many ways, opportunity to get study.
>>> So it is true that we study a lot, we have many ways and opportunities to get study.
But everything it is about efficiency.
>>> But everything is about efficiency.
Koreans spend 8 hours 55 minutes in studying math which is higher than the smartest country Finland.
>>> Koreans spend 8 hours 55 minutes studying math which is higher than the smartest country Finland.
But at (PISA· Program for International Student Assessment)
>>> CORRECT
Koreans got 542 points which is lower than Finland\'s(544 points).
Koreans got 542 points which is lower than Finland\'s(544 points).
>>> Koreans got 542 points which is lower than Finland\'s s(544 points).
Again to the point, Korea has a high quality and there are many chances to study.
>>> Again to the point, Korea has high quality and there are many chances to study.
However, Some experts criticize the efficiency of study and not having enough time for self-directed learning.
>>> However, some experts criticize the efficiency of study and not having enough time for self-directed learning.
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