Does your country have a good public transport system?
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Absolutely yes. I\'d love to talk about public transport system is cleaner than other countries. there\'s no pissy and poop smell by having a bathroom in there. But, it\'s the same thing in the world that there are a lot of homeless people, especially during a winter season. Besides them, it\'s a good thing.
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Happy Friday, Elic! A student who tries their very best is the optimal type of student. I actively see this personality trait in you. This is precisely what I like to see in students, and I know you\'re committed to improvement and growth.
Absolutely yes.
>>> CORRECT.
I\'d love to talk about public transport system is cleaner than other countries.
>>> I\'d love to talk about how the public transport system is cleaner than in other countries.
there\'s no pissy and poop smell by having a bathroom in there.
>>> There\'s no piss and poop smell from having a bathroom in there.
But, it\'s the same thing in the world that there are a lot of homeless people, especially during a winter season.
>>> But it\'s the same thing in the world: there are a lot of homeless people, especially during the winter season.
Besides them, it\'s a good thing.
>>> Besides, it\'s a good thing.
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