Does your country have a National health service or do you need to pay for all treatment?
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Korea has a National health service and I think this system is necessary for people\'s welfare.
We have to pay for some portion of our income as a tax to maintain a National health service and it is a quite large amount of our income.
But thanks to this system, people can get good qualities of medical treatments and buy many medicines cheaply.
Recently some people argue about privatizing a National health service, but I disagree with it as there would be many people in health service dead zone.
It is awful if I should pull my teeth and suture my wounds by my self because of expensive hospital bills like in US.
Also, we can\'t get surgeries even we are in critical condition.
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Korea has a National health service and I think this system is necessary for people\'s welfare.
>>> CORRECT =)
We have to pay for some portion of our income as a tax to maintain a National health service and it is a quite large amount of our income.
>>> We have to pay for some portion of our income as a tax to maintain the National health service and it is a quite large amount of our income.
But thanks to this system, people can get good qualities of medical treatments and buy many medicines cheaply.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR >>> But thanks to this system, people can get good qualities of medical treatments and buy many medicines at a cheap price.
Recently some people argue about privatizing a National health service, but I disagree with it as there would be many people in health service dead zone.
>>> Recently, some people argue about privatizing the National health service, but I disagree with it as there would be many people in a health service dead zone.
It is awful if I should pull my teeth and suture my wounds by my self because of expensive hospital bills like in US.
>>> It would be awful if I should pull my teeth and suture my wounds by myself because of expensive hospital bills like in the U.S.
Also, we can\'t get surgeries even we are in critical condition.
>>> Also, we can\'t get surgeries even when we are in critical condition.
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