Does your country have a special food for winter season? / What food does your family enjoy eating

2019-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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we have many kind of winter food and snack it\'s specially famous things are street foods. The first food, I\'m going to introduce is Bungeo-ppang it is a fish-shaped bun that is fill with sweet red beans and it has many variation of various shapes some shaped-flower or wallnut. peaunt, even more some a walnut or peaunt shaped-bun\'s delopvement version is full of sweet red bean and piece of small walnut or peaunt mixed in, literally. In succession, the second food is hotteok This is korean style pancake that full of sweet filling. It\'s certainly composed with flour dough, brown sugar, and walnut. hotteak is actually most favorite winter snack among i introduced food before. Last one. the third food is fish cake soup It\'s one of popular side dish for alcoholic drink Because korean\'s winter is very cold and this food taste is base on refreshing, it\'s can be with any alcoholic drink. Moreover, fish cake soup is very easy for make it! I think these food is symbol of korean winter

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Those food items you mentioned are all perfect for winter. They must be good sources of income for small entrepreneurs. I hope you get to enjoy them this winter season. ~~T.Dee

we have many kind of winter food and snack

>>We have many kinds of winter food and snacks.
 it\'s specially famous things are street foods.

>>Those which are popular are street foods.
The first food, I\'m going to introduce is Bungeo-ppang.

>>CORRECT!

 it is a fish-shaped bun that is fill with sweet red beans and it has many variation of various shapes

>> It is a fish-shaped bun that is filled with sweet red beans. It could have many variations in terms of the shape.
some shaped-flower or wallnut. peaunt, even more some a walnut or peaunt shaped-bun\'s delopvement version is full of sweet red bean and piece of small walnut or peaunt mixed in, literally.

>>Some come in shapes of a flower or a walnut or a peanut. Common ones are those shaped like a walnut or a peanut. In the insider it is full of sweet red bean and piece of small walnut or peaunt mixed in.
In succession, the second food is hotteok

>>Next is hotteok.

This is korean style pancake that full of sweet filling.

>>This is a Korean pancake that full of sweet filling.
It\'s certainly composed with flour dough, brown sugar, and walnut.

>>CORRECT!
 hotteak is actually most favorite winter snack among i introduced food before.

>>It is actually the most favorite winter snack of those whom I introduced the food to.
Last one. the third food is fish cake soup

>>And lastly, the fish cake soup.
 It\'s one of popular side dish for alcoholic drink

>> It\'s one of popular side dishes paired with an alcoholic drink.
Because korean\'s winter is very cold and this food taste is base on refreshing, it\'s can be with any alcoholic drink.

>>Because winter in Korea is very cold, the soup is very appropriate.  It can also paired with any alcoholic drink.
 Moreover, fish cake soup is very easy for make it!

>>CORRECT!
 I think these food is symbol of korean winter

>> I think these food items symbolize the winter in Korea.

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