Does your country have some special food for any of the seasons?
학생이 쓴 원문
The spring we have side dish to pick shoot. In spring we feel very languid. So we want to eat special and fresh food. The new shoot growing in sping iis very fresh and good for health.
The summer we have cold food. I feel like a little chilly when I have cold food In a hot day. The most favorite food is cold noodless. And in summer season we feel very weak. So sometimes we eat healty food. The most favorite healty food is 삼계탕. We eat healty food when most hat seasons.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [Name]!
Thank you for this and I am truly amazed that in the world, we have different types of food for each season.
See you in class!
Aki~
The spring we have side dish to pick shoot.
>>> In the spring we enjoy shoots for a side dish.
In spring we feel very languid.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> We feel energetic in spring.
So we want to eat special and fresh food.
>> CORRECT!
The new shoot growing in sping iis very fresh and good for health.
>>> The new shoot growing in spring is very fresh and good for health.
The summer we have cold food.
>>> In the summer we have cold food.
I feel like a little chilly when I have cold food In a hot day.
>>> I feel a little chilly when I have cold food on a hot day.
The most favorite food is cold noodless. And in summer season we feel very weak.
>>> The most favorite food is cold noodles. And in the summer season, we feel very weak.
So sometimes we eat healthy food.
>>> CORRECT!
The most favorite healty food is 삼계탕.
>>> The most favorite healthy food is Samgyetang or chicken ginseng soup.
We eat healty food when most hat seasons.
>>> We eat healthy food in a hot season.
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