Does your country provide a good public school system? Why do you think so?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think so.
First, until high school education system, it is free.
And also the process of the system is nice, and clean.
I can\'t say that the system is the best, but I can say that the system is good.
Of course there are a few disadvantages of the system, but I think advantages are bigger than those.
Because of this reason, I think my country provide a good public school system.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for the consistent effort! Just watch for redundant expression in the same sentence. Great job today! see you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I think so.>>CORRECT
First, until high school education system, it is free.
First, until high school education system, it is free.
>>First, education is free until high school.
And also the process of the system is nice, and clean.
And also the process of the system is nice, and clean.
>>CORRECT
I can\'t say that the system is the best, but I can say that the system is good.
I can\'t say that the system is the best, but I can say that the system is good.
>>I can\'t say that the system is the best, but I can say that it is good. (redundant expression)
Of course there are a few disadvantages of the system, but I think advantages are bigger than those.
Of course there are a few disadvantages of the system, but I think advantages are bigger than those.
>>Of course there are a few disadvantages of the system, but I think the advantages are bigger than those.
Because of this reason, I think my country provide a good public school system.
Because of this reason, I think my country provide a good public school system.
>>Because of this reason, I think my country provides a good public school system.
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