Does your family sit down to have breakfast every day? Or do you eat on the go?(ANSWER)

2018-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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My family doesn't sit down to have a breakfast, and doesn't eat on the go. My family usually have no time to have a breakfast together. Also my family hane no time to eat breakfast on the go. And me too. My family is always busy. I think eating breakfast on the go is bad. -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Does your family sit down to have breakfast every day? Or do you eat on the go?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

My family doesn\'t sit down to have a breakfast, and doesn\'t eat on the go.
My family usually have no time to have a breakfast together.
Also my family hane no time to eat breakfast on the go. And me too.
My family is always busy.
I think eating breakfast on the go is bad.

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CORRECTIONS:

 

 My family doesn\'t sit down to have a breakfast, and doesn\'t eat on the go.
My family usually have no time to have a breakfast together.
Also
, my family have no time to eat breakfast on the go and that is including me.
My family is always busy.
And, I think eating breakfast on the go is bad.

 


** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Well done! Only a few mistakes you have. 😊 Please take note of the corrections.

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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