Does your happiness change during different times of the day, week, month or year?
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My happiness changes during different times of the day and month. It is the day when I forgot to hand out my homework of university course. This case, my happiness turns into anger. Actually, today (3/22) is included.........
Also, when my school exam date is coming, my happiness turns into anxiety. Above all, I think I\'m always happy and bright haha
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Hi there [이름] again!
Thank you for answering once more!
I think that\'s good!
You are normally happy so I think it\'s good. Have a good day!
My happiness changes during different times of the day and month.
>>CORRECT
It is the day when I forgot to hand out my homework of university course.
>>CORRECT
This case, my happiness turns into anger.
>>In this case, my happiness turns into anger.
Actually, today (3/22) is included.........
>>Actually, today I feel the same.
Also, when my school exam date is coming, my happiness turns into anxiety.
>>CORRECT
Above all, I think I\'m always happy and bright haha
>>CORRECT
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