Does your personality change when you’re gaming?
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I am a person who does not enjoy playing games. However, I agree that some people change their personalities while gaming including my younger brother. Almost every games have anonymous characteristics. Given this characteristic, gamers tend to talk and behave carelessly compared to attitudes in real society. It does not mean that gamers always use aggressive words and behaviors while gaming. However, it means that their attitudes and words become more comfortable because gamers do not respect people following ages.
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Happy Monday Helena!
I totally agree that there are changes when it comes to gaming, like raising the tone of one\'s voice or shouting, which can be due to the anonymity of the player so they can do what they want.
-T. Caitlyn
I am a person who does not enjoy playing games.
>> CORRECT
However, I agree that some people change their personalities while gaming including my younger brother.
>> CORRECT
Almost every games have anonymous characteristics.
>> Most players are anonymous.
Given this characteristic, gamers tend to talk and behave carelessly compared to attitudes in real society.
>> By having an anonymous character, gamers tend to talk and behave carelessly compared to attitudes in real society.
It does not mean that gamers always use aggressive words and behaviors while gaming.
>> CORRECT
However, it means that their attitudes and words become more comfortable because gamers do not respect people following ages.
>> However, it means that their attitudes and words become more comfortable because gamers do not respect people and do not give importance to age.
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