Dogs
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It sounds like your dog is very cute!!! I want to have my own dog too! (^____^). Even though your dog sometimes does stupid stuff it's okay because she is still cute! Haha Well, I hope that this year will be a good year for your dog too! Takecare of Noori! Don't forget to feed her my dear. (^^,)
I'll talk to you again soon! Sweet dreams.
~t.Karen (-^o^-)
I will represent you my dog noori.
>> I will tell you about my dog, Noori.
She is a girl with brownish soft fur.
>> Correct!
And it likes to sit on dad lap and eating meat the most.
>> She likes eating on my dad's lap and she likes eating meat the most.
She is very cute than any of dogs.
>> She's cuter than most dogs.
But sometimes she acts dumb such as peeing in the carpet and pooping in somewhere else...
>> Sometimes she acts dumb like peeing in the carpet and pooping everywhere.
But our family loves her because she act charmimimg.
>> But our family loves her because she is charming.
Especillay if she is on dad`s lap!
>> Correct!
This is the reason why our family likes noori.
>> Correct! But capitalize the first letter of Noori's name. (:
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