dogs!!

2019-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Hi, my name is [이름]! Dogs are very cute and very interesting animals. I like dogs. I also my favorite animals are dogs. But I send my dog.......I am sad. My dogs good at run. I also I like all animals. My brother like dogs. I wnat to again raise it dogs. Because dog is cute, fun and interesting. Thank you for listening for my story.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for sharing your love for animals especially with dogs.

It\'s really nice to know that you care for them and you want to raise them as pets.

I hope that you can find another dog to raise so that you can be happy again.

Anyway, I hope that you will have a good night and a great weekend ahead.

Take care and see you on Monday. ^^


~Teacher Gina



Hi, my name is [이름]!

>> CORRECT.

 Dogs are very cute and very interesting animals.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Dogs are very cute and amusing animals.


 I like dogs.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I love dogs.


 I also my favorite animals are dogs.

>> My favorite animals are dogs also.

 But I send my dog.......I am sad.
>> But I sent my dog away. I am sad.


 My dogs good at run.

>> My dogs are good at running.

 I also I like all animals.
>> I also like all animals.


 My brother like dogs.

>> My brother likes dogs.

 I wnat to again raise it dogs.
>> I want to raise dogs again.


 Because dog is cute, fun and interesting.
>> Because dogs are cute, fun and interesting.


 Thank you for listening for my story.

>> Thank you for listening to my story.

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