dogs!!
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your love for animals especially with dogs.
It\'s really nice to know that you care for them and you want to raise them as pets.
I hope that you can find another dog to raise so that you can be happy again.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a good night and a great weekend ahead.
Take care and see you on Monday. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Hi, my name is [이름]!
>> CORRECT.
Dogs are very cute and very interesting animals.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Dogs are very cute and amusing animals.
I like dogs.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I love dogs.
I also my favorite animals are dogs.
>> My favorite animals are dogs also.
But I send my dog.......I am sad.
>> But I sent my dog away. I am sad.
My dogs good at run.
>> My dogs are good at running.
I also I like all animals.
>> I also like all animals.
My brother like dogs.
>> My brother likes dogs.
I wnat to again raise it dogs.
>> I want to raise dogs again.
Because dog is cute, fun and interesting.
>> Because dogs are cute, fun and interesting.
Thank you for listening for my story.
>> Thank you for listening to my story.
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