Doing homework is important!
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to tell a student who absolutely hates homework that if you live your life doing what you want to do, you won\'t be able to enjoy proper entertainment later. Homework is something that has to be done, and homework is related to responsibility. Do what you want to do first, then do what you want to do.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I want to tell a student who absolutely hates homework that if you live your life doing what you want to do, you won\'t be able to enjoy proper entertainment later.
>>> CORRECT!
Homework is something that has to be done, and homework is related to responsibility.
>>> CORRECT!
Do what you want to do first, then do what you want to do.
>>> CORRECT!
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