Doing nothing is meaningful
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the words \"leisure\" or \"margin.\" If humans live in a tightl framework without any rests, they experience stress. Therefore, I believe that setting time each day to do absolutely nothing is meaningful.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Ms. [Name]! I hope your holiday season was filled with joy and relaxation. Did you get to spend a lot of time with family or maybe take a well-deserved break? I’d love to hear what you were up to.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I like the words \"leisure\" or \"margin.\"
>>> I’ve always appreciated words like \'leisure\' and \'margin.
If humans live in a tightl framework without any rests, they experience stress.
>>> When humans live within a rigid framework with little room for rest, stress inevitably builds up.
Therefore, I believe that setting time each day to do absolutely nothing is meaningful.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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