Doing somethinf for my health.

2013-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Actually, I don't do anything for my health. A few months ago, I went to gym. But one month later, I stopped going to gym. In addition, I love to eat all kinds of meat. However, I try to walk more. So I usually walk from home to subway station. I know it is very trivial. And I have to do something for my health. So I will go to Yoga institute and eat more vegetables.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday [이름]! Yes, it is indeed important that we maintain our health. I hope that you can finally decide on which way you are going to keep your body healthy. As long we exercise, I think even if we eat a lot, we can still stay healthy. ^^ See you later. -- T. Giselle ^^   Actually, I don\'t do anything for my health.>> Correct.A few months ago, I went to gym.Better: >> A few months ago, I went to the gym.But one month later, I stopped going to gym.Better: >> But one monthe later, I stopped going there.In addition, I love to eat all kinds of meat.>> Correct.However, I try to walk more.>> Correct.So I usually walk from home to subway station.>> Correct. Better: >> So I usually walk from home to the subway station.I know it is very trivial. And I have to do something for my health.>> I know it is very trivial but I have to do something for my health.So I will go to Yoga institute and eat more vegetables. >> Correct.

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