Doing somethinf for my health.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don't do anything for my health.
A few months ago, I went to gym.
But one month later, I stopped going to gym.
In addition, I love to eat all kinds of meat.
However, I try to walk more.
So I usually walk from home to subway station.
I know it is very trivial. And I have to do something for my health.
So I will go to Yoga institute and eat more vegetables.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
Yes, it is indeed important that we maintain our health.
I hope that you can finally decide on which way you are going to keep your body healthy.
As long we exercise, I think even if we eat a lot, we can still stay healthy. ^^
See you later.
-- T. Giselle ^^
Actually, I don\'t do anything for my health.>> Correct.A few months ago, I went to gym.Better: >> A few months ago, I went to the gym.But one month later, I stopped going to gym.Better: >> But one monthe later, I stopped going there.In addition, I love to eat all kinds of meat.>> Correct.However, I try to walk more.>> Correct.So I usually walk from home to subway station.>> Correct.
Better: >> So I usually walk from home to the subway station.I know it is very trivial. And I have to do something for my health.>> I know it is very trivial but I have to do something for my health.So I will go to Yoga institute and eat more vegetables.
>> Correct.
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