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Bonjour Debby :) I agree with that it is a good way to find the weaknesses out in me. Of course, if we find out our weaknesses, we shouldn't be disappointed and feel down but make ourselves improved as fixing that. I always try to do like that though it is really hard. I always feel that I'm lack of listening skill. However the speed of speaking is, I can't often understand what a person's saying exactly. So I need to ask to speak what he/she said again. As I do that, I feel sorry about annoying him/her. I know I'm not trying hard to inhance my skills. I'm also person so I want to take a break when I have free time. But I will never give up because this is what I pursue. <Essay> I got a many changes during ten years. I was not a timid person. And I really dislike English until I was in middle school. Who expected me to major in English & Literature?

Hi there [이름]^^   Wow! you\'re greeting me in French!^^ I like that.^^ On a positive note, you are one person who seems to not give up easily. And as my student I think that I should feel lucky as your teacher since you are open minded and optimistic.   I hope that you got my corrections and feel free to ask questions. Have a great day ahead. Tae care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   Bonjour Debby :)>> CORRECT! OR> Good day Debby^^I agree with that it is a good way to find the weaknesses out in me. >> CORRECT OR> It is best to be aware of my weaknesses.  Of course, if we find out our weaknesses, we shouldn\'t be disappointed and feel down but make ourselves improved as fixing that. >> Of course, if we find out our weaknesses, we shouldn\'t be disappointed and feel down but  we must improve ourselves as we fix it. I always try to do like that though it is really hard. >> CORRECT OR> I always try but it\'s very challenging.I always feel that I\'m lack of listening skill. >> I always feel that I lack listening skill. However the speed of speaking is, I can\'t often understand what a person\'s saying exactly. >> However with the speed of speaking, I can\'t often understand what a person\'s saying exactly. OR> However when someone speaks fast, I can\'t often understand what a person is saying exactly. So I need to ask to speak what he/she said again. As I do that, I feel sorry about annoying him/her. >> So I need to ask him/her to repeat what he/she said. As I do that, I feel sorry about annoying him/her.I know I\'m not trying hard to inhance my skills. >> I know I\'m not trying hard to enhance my skills.  I\'m also person so I want to take a break when I have free time. >> CORRECT! OR> I feel the need to have a break since I am just human. But I will never give up because this is what I pursue.>> CORRECT OR> I will put on a lot of effort since this is what I really like.<Essay>I got a many changes during ten years. I was not a timid person. >> I got many changes in ten years. I was not a timid person. [Remove \"a\" since the word many is plural and use \"in\" not \"during\" since you are talking about the period within ten years.] And I really dislike English until I was in middle school. >> CORRECT OR> I was not fond of English until I got to middle school.  Who expected me to major in English & Literature? >> CORRECT OR> Who would have thought that I will take English and Literature as my major?