Dolphins Have Names, Too
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm suprised when I heard this fact. This fact is discovered by researchers. I think dolphins have names then other animals hav names. So we don't know their's name but they have names. It's very amazing. Name is very important for many forms of life. In my opinions, if we don't have names, we can't call each other. This is very terrible.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Thanks for writing a composition about this topic. I find this amazing as well. ^^ Please take note of my corrections here. Have a good evening!
~Teacher Ritchel~
I\'m suprised when I heard this fact.
>> CORRECT
This fact is discovered by researchers.
>> CORRECT
I think dolphins have names then other animals hav names.
>> I think dolphins have names, but other animals don\'t have it.
So we don\'t know their\'s name but they have names.
>> So we don\'t know their names, but they do have names.
It\'s very amazing.
>> CORRECT
Name is very important for many forms of life.
>> CORRECT
OR >> A name is very important for many living things.
In my opinions, if we don\'t have names, we can\'t call each other.
>> In my opinion, if we don\'t have names we can\'t call each other properly.
This is very terrible.
>> CORRECT
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