Don Quixote
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Indeed, Don Quixote teaches us a good lesson, and yes! You do have a point, we should really be ashamed for being normal and sane, when we don뭪 have dreams, goals and ambitions in life, I think Don Quixote is trying to tell us that nothing is impossible and that we should follow and pursue our dreams, because that is what life is all about.
-Verna-
Have you ever read the book Don Quixote?
>>correct
This
book is written by Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra.
>>This book was written by Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra.
Don
Quixote determines to become a knight and pursue the great adventures,
accompanied by his servant Sancho.
>>correct
Actually Don Quixote has the mental problem.
>>Actually Don Quixote has some mental problems.
He
mistake windmill for the giant.
>>He thinks that the windmill is a giant.
I read
it in the elementay school and I could not understand.
>>I read it when I was in elementary and I couldn뭪 understand
it.
I
thought this story is about crazy man, and there was no lesson.. So I don’t
like Don Quixote,
>>I thought the story was about a crazy man, and I thought
there wasn뭪 any lesson, so I didn뭪 like the story of Don Quixote.
but
when I saw the musical Don Quixote, I was
moved to tears when He sang a song [impossible dreams] I fell in love with Don
Quixote.
>>But,
when I saw the musical Don Quixote, I was moved by tears when he sang the song,
밫he impossible dreams
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