Don\'t be afraid of difficulties to get wisdom
학생이 쓴 원문
If you want to have something good, you should try hard to get it. It\'s because good things are called \"good\" because they are difficult to get. Among good things that everyone wants to have, wisdom is the most difficult thing to have.
I think wisdom is different from knowledge. You cannot get it through others or books. Perhaps books or advices of others would be helpful to get wisdom, but they are not direct ways to have it. You have to experience directly to get wisdom. Especially a lot of difficulties and failures would be the best way to be wise.
I think wisdom teaches you how to solve problems in front of you and others. It is came from failures you faced. That\'s why wisdom is the hardest thing to get. Nobody wants to undergo difficulties. Nobody can overcome them easily.
If you want to be wiser, don\'t be afraid of failures. They would help you have power. That power would become wisdom.
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HAPPY MONDAY!
Interesting points today, [이름] and I definitely agree.
How wise are you today? :)
Composition is spot-on!
Good job!
~Teacher Eve.
If you want to have something good, you should try hard to get it.
>> Correct!
It\'s because good things are called \"good\" because they are difficult to get.
>> Correct!
Among good things that everyone wants to have, wisdom is the most difficult thing to have.
>> Correct!
I think wisdom is different from knowledge.
>> Correct!
You cannot get it through others or books.
>> You cannot get it from others or books.
Perhaps books or advices of others would be helpful to get wisdom, but they are not direct ways to have it.
>> Correct!
You have to experience directly to get wisdom.
>> You have to experience in order for you to get wisdom.
Especially a lot of difficulties and failures would be the best way to be wise.
>> Correct!
I think wisdom teaches you how to solve problems in front of you and others.
>> Correct!
It is came from failures you faced.
>> It came from the failures you\'ve faced.
That\'s why wisdom is the hardest thing to get.
>> Correct!
Nobody wants to undergo difficulties.
>> Correct!
Nobody can overcome them easily.
>> Correct!
If you want to be wiser, don\'t be afraid of failures.
>> Correct!
They would help you have power.
>> They would help you have the power.
That power would become wisdom.
>> Correct!
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