Don\'t know what to do..
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was third class. Actually, i went to the university. i go to university about 2 hours.. i was so tired. So I think \'I delay once the online english class..\' But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first, i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking. But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher.. When i fiil up the blanks, i don\'t understand my teacher intention. In the last class, i think i\'am good at filling up the blanks. But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..) But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
But today, i written last class about \'i tried to tell for 15 mintues\' maybe i think that i accomplish! So I always continue to try to speak english more.. until i become person fluently speak english!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
Always thank you!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I understand your condition as a University student. You did well in the class today and I can see your effort to participate and listen to the teacher. I like your attitude towards learning English. Keep it up and I know you will improve more. Be confident when speaking and don\'t be shy to speak more in the class. Keep improving your English skills.
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Today was third class.
>> It\'s my third class today.
Actually, i went to the university.
>> Actually, I went to the University.
i go to university about 2 hours.
>>I went to the University for about 2 hours.
i was so tired.
>> I was so tired.
>>So I think \'I delay once the online english class..\'
>> So I was thinking if I will cancel my Online English class.
But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first,
>>But when I think about the online class vs my present condition, I will choose the online class first.
i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking.
>> I just studied for only two days meanwhile, I really expect that I will learn a lot and improve my English speaking skills.
But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher..
>>But when I take online classes when I\'m tired my teacher might notice it.
When i fiil up the blanks, i don\'t understand my teacher intention.
>> When I fill in the blanks, I didn\'t understand my teacher\'s instructions.
In the last class, i think i\'am good at filling up the blanks.
>> In the last class, I answered correctly the fill-in-the-blanks activity.
But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..)
>>But today I didn\'t answer well. (Sorry. Teacher..)
But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
>>But my teacher was very relaxed and slowly told me the thing I needed to do to fill in the blanks correctly.
But today, i written last class about \'i tried to tell for 15 mintues\' maybe i think that i accomplish!
>> But today, I wrote about our last class. I tried to write for 15 minutes maybe and I think that I accomplished it!
So I always continue to try to speak english more... until i become person fluently speak english!!
>> So I always continue and try to speak English more until I become a person who fluently speaks English!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
>>In the next class, I certainly bring things that I need to speak English by myself.
Always thank you!!
>>Always thank you!!
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Today was third class. Actually, i went to the university. i go to university about 2 hours.. i was so tired. So I think \'I delay once the online english class..\' But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first, i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking. But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher.. When i fiil up the blanks, i don\'t understand my teacher intention. In the last class, i think i\'am good at filling up the blanks. But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..) But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
But today, i written last class about \'i tried to tell for 15 mintues\' maybe i think that i accomplish! So I always continue to try to speak english more.. until i become person fluently speak english!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
Always thank you!!
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