Dona! I am kim!! I wrote too much sentences!!

2010-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Due to I wrote too much sentences I can't update my homework in the same space. Sorry. second, I wrote the question number 4. Korea is English as a foreign language country. So I think English is more harder than another language such as Japanese or Chinese. The two country's language ,Japanese and Chinese, have been exposed to Korean because of culture history. I think English and Korean are totally different so a lot of people who live in Korea have trouble in studying English. And Koreans are seldom using English in their daily routine. Koreans have their unique word that It's called 'hangle' made by king Saejong.Koreans have confidence using their words.In this reason, Koreans usually do not using English so lots of people in Korea have hard time to study English.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Kim,               I understand that Korean language is very different from other languages.  I뭢 happy that you are doing your best to learn our international language. Good job on your composition. I know that if you will practice writing more, you will be a great writer and great English speaker. Keep it up! -Verna- Due to I wrote too much sentences I can't update my homework in the same space. Sorry. >>Because I wrote very long sentences I can뭪 submit my homework in the same space.  Sorry.second, I wrote the question number 4. >>Second, I wrote answers for question number four.Korea is English as a foreign language country. >>In Korea English is a foreign language.So I think English is more harder than another language such as Japanese or Chinese.  >> So I think English is harder than other languages such as Japanese or Chinese. The two country's language ,Japanese and Chinese have been exposed to Korean because of culture history. >>Those two languages have been exposed to Korean because of historical culture.I think English and Korean are totally different so a lot of people who live in Korea have trouble in studying English. >> I think English and Korean languages are totally different so a lot of people who live in Korea have trouble in studying English.And Koreans are seldom using English in their daily routine. >>CorrectKoreans have their unique word that It's called 'hangle' made by king Saejong.Koreans have confidence using their words. >>Koreans have their unique language called 밐angeul

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