Donating money to poor people
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two situations; first situation is people who don\'t have enough money donate to poor people, and people who have enough money donate to poor people. I think first is wrong and second is great. Then I\'ll cite reason why first situation is wrong.
Though donation is very good behavior, but if I have not enough money then i can\'t donate. because I may more poor people so someone should donate for me. So the donation that I did is useless. In conclusion, we have to donate for poor people with enough money.
강사 첨삭
There are two situations; first situation is people who don\'t have enough money donate to poor people, and people who have enough money donate to poor people.
>> There are two kinds of people - people who don\'t have have enough money to donate to poor people and people who have enough money to donate to poor people.
Though donation is very good behavior, but if I have not enough money then i can\'t donate.
I think first is wrong and second is great.
>> I think the former is bad, and the latter is good.
Then I\'ll cite reason why first situation is wrong.
>> I\'ll cite reasons why the former is bad.
Though donation is very good behavior, but if I have not enough money then i can\'t donate.
>> Though donation is a very good behavior, I can\'t donate if I don\'t have enough money.
because I may more poor people so someone should donate for me.
>> In addition, I maybe poorer so someone should donate to me.
So the donation that I did is useless.
>> I\'m sorry. What do you mean?
In conclusion, we have to donate for poor people with enough money.
>> In conclusion, we have to donate money to poor people.
Thank you for trying your best to answer tonight\'s homework, Daniel.
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