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I think it\'s quite dangerous to encourage someone to donate money to a charity because donation should be a kind of voluntary activities which cannot be forced to do. >>I think it\'s quite dangerous to encourage someone to donate money to a charity because donation should be a kind of voluntary activity which cannot be forced.Then, it\'s going to happen in Korea for preventing the Korean economy disruption. >>IT will happen in Korea to prevent the Korean economic recession.
It seems to me that there is the irony. >>It seems to me that there is an irony.
They first had the talks over cash-handouts, which have come to a standstill now. >>correct They have brought up \"voluntary return\" from top earners who is urged to not take the cash-handouts in the first place, or to donate it. >>They have brought up, \"voluntary return,\" from top earners who are urged not to take cash-handouts in the first place, or to donate it. In my opinion, that seems like them saying \"I don\'t have any money, so why don\'t we fool the rich to donate money for us?\" still disgusting, they are all smart and the plan seems to be no way out. >>In my opinion, it seems like them saying, \"I don\'t have any money, so why don\'t we fool the rich to donate money for us. \" Still disgusting, they are all smart and the plan seems to be no way out. Who are they to force the rich to donate money? >>correct A donation is not the activity that can be forced to do. >>correct Then, some people might think this way, isn\'t there no one who is forcing or fooling people to donate? >>Then, some people might think this way, \"Is there no one who is forcing or fooling people to donate? But the trick goes like this. >>correct First, building up the standard is so difficult to be created easily, clearly and in an uncontroversial way that there should end up in trouble. >>First, building up the standard is so difficult to be created easily, clearly, and in an uncontroversial way which could end up in trouble. Second, people out of the rich list is more likely to devastate those who have donated less money than others, which also can discourage the top-earners to donate again. >>Second,out from the list of rich people are more likely to devastate those who have donated less money than others, which also can discourage the top-earners to donate again. Lastly, not every one believes the donated money goes in the right way and unfortunately, there\'s someone who doesn\'t let that happen. >>Lastly, not everyone believes the donated money will go in the right way, and unfortunately, there\'s always someone who will not let that happen. So sorry but I\'m too talkative
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