Doni~ Help me >.<
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Doni *^^*
This is the E-mail that I will send to my professor to ask something.
Could you correct the E-mail, if I am mistaken
Thank you *^^*
Hello, Kennedy
I'm Kim Heeah who taking English Pronunciation Clinic class
What I'm sending E-mail about is that I have some questions.
I am supposed to go to graduation trip from May 25th to 27th.
An official document will be issued about that. Could this trip be accepted as a attendance?
If you let me go to the graduation trip, May 27th is the Project day. What alternate way will be possible?
Have a nice weekend ^^!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Kennedy
>> correct
I'm Kim Heeah who taking English Pronunciation Clinic class
>>I'm Kim Heeah, I'm taking up English Pronunciation Clinic class.
What I'm sending E-mail about is that I have some questions.>> The reason why I'm sending you a mail is that I have important question.
I am supposed to go to graduation trip from May 25th to 27th
>> I am supposed to go to graduation trip this coming 25th of May until the 27th.
An official document will be issued about that. Could this trip be accepted as a attendance?
>> Official document will be given. Is it possible that this trip would be accepted as my attendance?
If you let me go to the graduation trip, May 27th is the Project day. What alternate way will be possible?
>> if you allow me to go to the graduation trip, May 27 is the Project day. What is the other possible alternative?
Have a nice weekend ^^!!
>>correct
Hello Cheska, I hope that I helped you in this letter. I'm just a little bit confused about the Project day though. I don't know what is that all about, But anyways, I hope that your "handsome" professor will allow you.
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