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2021-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Our family bought NetFlix ID!!!! My parents watched \'The Squid Game\' yesterday.. I watched \'The D★P\'. D★P Is very fun&interesting Netflix original series about Korean soldier. My friend wants to join NetFlix. I will watch all fun,famous movie&Netflix series!! I can do it!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

Our family bought NetFlix ID!!!!

>>Our family bought Netflix.

I watched \'The D★P\'. D★P Is very fun&interesting Netflix original series about Korean soldier.

>>>I watched \'The D★P\'. D★P is a very fun and interesting Netflix original series about a Korean soldier.

My friend wants to join NetFlix.

>>My friend also wants to have NetFlix.

I will watch all fun,famous movie&Netflix series!!

>>I will watch all the fun and famous movies from Netflix!

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