double parking

2023-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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In the present, if someone parks in a handicapped parking space, someone should pay a fine(100,000won). But when someone parks prenant seat or senior seat in the subway or bus, there is no penalty. Just poeple stare them. Some apartment and public organization secommend to visitor double parking because ther are lack parking place seriously.. But that time, we have to keep rules. When we double parking we should put in neutral gear and leave phone number.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]!
This is an individual\'s responsibility and sensibility. I guess everyone must know how to abide by the rules in order not to be penalized or criticized. 
Thank you for this. I\'ll call you later.
Aki~


In the present, if someone parks in a handicapped parking space, someone should pay a fine(100,000won).
>>> At present, if someone parks in a handicapped parking space, they should pay a fine of 100,000 won.

But when someone parks prenant seat or senior seat in the subway or bus, there is no penalty.
>>> But there is no penalty when someone seats on the space provided for pregnant or seniors on the subway or bus.

Just poeple stare them.
>>> Just people stare at them.

Some apartment and public organization secommend to visitor double parking because ther are lack parking place seriously.
>>> Some apartments and public organizations recommend visitors double parking because there is a serious lack of parking places.

But that time, we have to keep rules. When we double parking we should put in neutral gear and leave phone number.
>>>  But that time, we have to keep the rules. When we double parking we should put in neutral gear and leave a phone number.

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