Downsizing notice

2013-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Yesterday, My boss(president) announced that downsizing is needed to rebuild our company business. Thesed days, my company has struggling in profit. We all got shcoked even though we expected that situation. I am worried about losing my job, I enjoy working at work but as economy gross decreases in the world we have to layoff. I might the one of the umemployments in my company. I am very sad to hear that but I should overcome the situation by getting another job soon. Actually, it's very hard to get a job now due to economic recession in Korea. The only one we can expect good things is the compensation benefit. we want to get high compensation fee about 2 years annual salary. I think 2 yrs salary is good enough to make us feel a relif even if we lost our job soon. Anyway I need to apply for another company to get a job soon. I want to the next company which is stable environment to work hard.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon!

This is truly one of the things that can be regarded as inevitable particularly now that we are experiencing a lot of crises.

I am really hoping for the best for you and your friends.

I hope that everything will work out perfectly to your advantage.

Always take care...^^

And by the way,

happy hearts\' day!^^

_T.Nina^^

Yesterday, My boss(president) announced that downsizing is needed to rebuild our company business.

>>Correct

OR >> Yesterday, my boss announced that downsizing is needed to rebuild our business.

>>Yesterday, my boss announced that downsizing is required to rebuild our company.

Thesed days, my company has struggling in profit.

>>These days, my company is struggling to gain profit.
We all got shcoked even though we expected that situation.

>>We were all shocked even though we expected it to happen.
I am worried about losing my job.

>>Correct!

I enjoy working at work but as economy gross decreases in the world we have to layoff.

>>I enjoy working but since the economic gross is decreasing worldwide, we have to layoff.

I might the one of the umemployments in my company.

>>I might be regarded as one of the unemployed people in the company.

>> I might be the one who will be kicked off from the company.

I am very sad to hear that but I should overcome the situation by getting another job soon.

>>Correct!

Actually, it\'s very hard to get a job now due to economic recession in Korea.

>>Correct!
The only one we can expect good things is the compensation benefit.

>>The only good thing that we can expect for is the compensation benefit.
we want to get high compensation fee about 2 years annual salary.

>>We want to get a high compensation fee for our 2-year salary.
I think 2 yrs salary is good enough to make us feel a relif even if we lost our job soon.

>>I think this 2-year salary is good enough to make us feel relieved even if we lost our job.

Anyway I need to apply for another company to get a job soon.

>>Correct!

OR >> Anyway, I need to apply to another company to get a job soon.
I want to the next company which is stable environment to work hard.

>>I want my next company to be a stable environment for me where I can work hard.

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