Downsizing notice
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
This is truly one of the things that can be regarded as inevitable particularly now that we are experiencing a lot of crises.
I am really hoping for the best for you and your friends.
I hope that everything will work out perfectly to your advantage.
Always take care...^^
And by the way,
happy hearts\' day!^^
_T.Nina^^
Yesterday, My boss(president) announced that downsizing is needed to rebuild our company business.
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OR >> Yesterday, my boss announced that downsizing is needed to rebuild our business.
>>Yesterday, my boss announced that downsizing is required to rebuild our company.
Thesed days, my company has struggling in profit.
>>These days, my company is struggling to gain profit.
We all got shcoked even though we expected that situation.
>>We were all shocked even though we expected it to happen.
I am worried about losing my job.
I enjoy working at work but as economy gross decreases in the world we have to layoff.
>>I enjoy working but since the economic gross is decreasing worldwide, we have to layoff.
I might the one of the umemployments in my company.
>>I might be regarded as one of the unemployed people in the company.
>> I might be the one who will be kicked off from the company.
I am very sad to hear that but I should overcome the situation by getting another job soon.
>>Correct!
Actually, it\'s very hard to get a job now due to economic recession in Korea.
>>Correct!
The only one we can expect good things is the compensation benefit.
>>The only good thing that we can expect for is the compensation benefit.
we want to get high compensation fee about 2 years annual salary.
>>We want to get a high compensation fee for our 2-year salary.
I think 2 yrs salary is good enough to make us feel a relif even if we lost our job soon.
>>I think this 2-year salary is good enough to make us feel relieved even if we lost our job.
Anyway I need to apply for another company to get a job soon.
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OR >> Anyway, I need to apply to another company to get a job soon.
I want to the next company which is stable environment to work hard.
>>I want my next company to be a stable environment for me where I can work hard.
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