Drama.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby.
It\'s not windy and rainning but it\'s a little chilly today and the sky is cloudy.
I walked 8,000 steps today. What exercise were you today?
First son\'s wife made a demand divorce a lot of compensation to father-in-law.
She gots married for money and she has each other love person.
She gots to know her husband is meeting first love.
He disappeared to received text message \'Let\'s divorce\' of his wife.
The 2th son couple are greedy and his wife\'s mother is greedy too.
The 3th son helps his father and new mother. He knows marriage of father a lie
The 4th son begans work. He is going to a adult mentally.
Be continued.
Bye Gabby.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
It\'s not windy and raining but it\'s a little chilly today and the sky is cloudy.
>> It\'s not windy and rainy but it\'s a little chilly today and the sky is cloudy.
I walked 8,000 steps today.
I walked 8,000 steps today.
>> Correct.
What exercise were you today?
>> What exercise did you do today?
First son\'s wife made a demand divorce a lot of compensation to father-in-law.
First son\'s wife made a demand divorce a lot of compensation to father-in-law.
>> My first son\'s wife demanded a divorce with a lot of compensation to his father-in-law.
She gots married for money and she has each other love person.
She gots married for money and she has each other love person.
>> She got married for money and she has other love.
She got to know her husband is meeting first love.
She got to know her husband is meeting first love.
>> She got to know her husband at love at first sight.
He disappeared to received text message \'Let\'s divorce\' of his wife.
He disappeared to received text message \'Let\'s divorce\' of his wife.
>> He disappeared then received a text message \'Let\'s divorce\' from his wife.
The 2th son couple are greedy and his wife\'s mother is greedy too.
The 2th son couple are greedy and his wife\'s mother is greedy too.
>> The second son is greedy and his wife\'s mother is greedy too.
The 3th son helps his father and new mother.
The 3th son helps his father and new mother.
>> The 3rd son helps his father and his new mother.
He knows marriage of father a lie
>> He knows that it\'s a lie.
The 4th son begans work.
The 4th son begans work.
>> The 4th son started working.
He is going to a adult mentally.
>> He things maturely now.
Be continued.
Be continued.
>> To be continued.
Bye Gabby.
Bye Gabby.
>> Correct.
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