Drama

2010-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I watched drama everyday night. I watched "Dong-E" in Monday and Tuesday night. "Dong-E" is historical drama about Dong-E who was royal concubine. I want to watch "My sister story of legendary fox with nine tails" but I didn't. Because it was broadcasted in same time "Dong-E". In Wednesday and Thursday I watched "King of making bread, Kim TakKu". and I watched reruns of "My girl friend is legendary fox with nine tails". Legendary fox with nine tails is known it ate livers of human. I think legendary fox with nine tails in the East like vampire in the West. In the weekend, I usually watched entertainment shows like "We got married" and "Limitless Challenges". "Limitless Challenges" is "MuhanDojeon" in Korean pronunciation.

강사 첨삭

HI [이름], I was hoping to see the “Giant” haha. I guess you don’t like that hmm. I’m interested with the legendary fox maybe you can tell me something about it. See you tonight, Connie   I watched drama everyday night. >> I watch drama every night. I watched "Dong-E" in Monday and Tuesday night. >> I watch “Dong-E” every Monday and Tuesday nights. "Dong-E" is historical drama about Dong-E who was royal concubine. >> Correct  I want to watch "My sister story of legendary fox with nine tails" but I didn't. Because it was broadcasted in same time "Dong-E". >> I want to watch “My sister story of legendary fox with nine tails” but I can’t because it is being aired at the same time with Dong-E.In Wednesday and Thursday I watched "King of making bread, Kim TakKu". and I watched reruns of "My girl friend is legendary fox with nine tails". Legendary fox with nine tails is known it ate livers of human. I think legendary fox with nine tails in the East like vampire in the West. >> In Wednesdays and Thursdays, I watch “King of making bread but im Takku” and “My girlfriend is legendary fox with nine tails”.  The legendary fox has nine tails and it is known to eat livers of human. I think legendary fox with nine tails in the East is like vampire in the West.In the weekend, I usually watch entertainment shows like "We got married" and "Limitless Challenges". >> Correct "Limitless Challenges" is "MuhanDojeon" in Korean pronunciation. >> Correct

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