Drama
학생이 쓴 원문
Watching drama is one of my hobby.
I start againg to watch foriegn drama these days, because it is a great help to English studying.My favorite is 'GLee'.
It has so many beatiful songs and good stories about teenagers.
However, there is one difficult thing in foriegn drama, actually 'Glee' too.
It is different values.
Values of western and eastern are very different, so I can not understand some of their opinion. For example, foriegn dramas are very open minded about sexally.
That's biggest problem to me. I feel bad when I listen any lewd conversation, but every foriegn dramas are talking about them.
So, I am agonizing that I will keep on watching foriegn dramas.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today! It\'s a good hobby to watch English dramas. You can learn new vocabularies and expressions that you may find useful in the future. Keep it up! Take care and enjoy the weekend!
T. JanE ^^
Watching drama is one of my hobby.>> Watching dramas is one of my hobbies.
I start againg to watch foriegn drama these days, because it is a great help to English studying.
>> I started watching foreign dramas again because it is helpful in studying English.
My favorite is \'Glee\'.>> Correct
It has so many beautiful songs and good stories about teenagers.>> Correct
However, there is one difficult thing in foriegn drama, actually \'Glee\' too.>> However, there is one difficult thing about foreign dramas, which is also true in \"Glee\".
It is different values. >> Their values are different from mine.
Values of western and eastern are very different, so I can not understand some of their opinions.
>> Correct
For example, foriegn dramas are very open minded about sexally.>> For example, foreign dramas are very open to sex.
That\'s biggest problem to me.
>> That\'s the biggest problem.
I feel bad when I listen any lewd conversation, but every foriegn dramas are talking about them.>> I feel bad when I hear lewd conversations, but every foreign drama has that kind of conversation.
So, I am agonizing that I will keep on watching foriegn dramas.
>> So I\'m in a dilemma whether to continue watching or not.
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