drama more than movie
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I like watching movie in theater or through Netflix. Nowadays however, I prefer watching drama more than movie because the story would be ended less than 2 hours in movie. it\'s not enough time to fall into story unless the movie was based on book and you already read it. Drama might take too much time than movie but it\'s better because when I watch drama I was able to understand a story more.
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Hi John!
We actually agree on this point.
You expressed your opinion well.
You got me to agree with you.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like watching movie in theater or through Netflix.
>> I like watching movies in the theater or through Netflix.
Nowadays however, I prefer watching drama more than movie because the story would be ended less than 2 hours in movie.
>> Nowadays, however, I prefer watching TV series more than movies because the story in a movie would end just after two hours.
it\'s not enough time to fall into story unless the movie was based on book and you already read it.
>> It\'s not enough time to fall into the story unless the movie was based on a book and you already read it.
Drama might take too much time than movie but it\'s better because when I watch drama I was able to understand a story more.
>> A TV series might take more time than movies but it\'s better because when I watch, I\'m able to understand the story better.
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