Dream

2010-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I have done homework about my dream. So this time I decided to write about "dream" when I sleep. I had a dream fifth a week. Almost I had a night mare, and it is vivid in my mind until now. Mainly I was pursued something. After sleeping, I felt always afraid and tired. I don't know why I had a night mare. Studies of sleeping, frequently vivid night mare is sign of Alzheimer's. Other researchers insist that to remember dream is good for improvement of memory. I confused which I should believe. Once in a while, I had a good dream. I was Harry Potter in this dream and I flied sky with broom. However I wasn't happy forever. It was rainstorm and suddenly I forgot how to use magic. I became embarrassing and scared and then I woke up. I want to sleep without any dreams whether it is good or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I also dream sometimes, like I am flying and the enemy is chasing me. At that point, I always try to wake up to finish it. After that, I pray before going back to bed. Here are the corrections. Stay safe,  -- Connie --   I have done homework about my dream. >> I already did homework about my dream. So this time I decided to write about "dream" when I sleep. >> correct I had a dream fifth a week. >> I dream five times a week. Almost I had a night mare, and it is vivid in my mind until now. >> I almost had a night mare and it’s still vivid in my mind now. Mainly I was pursued something. >> I pursued something. After sleeping, I felt always afraid and tired. >> After sleeping, I  always feel afraid and tired.  I don't know why I had a night mare. >> Correct Studies of sleeping, frequently vivid night mare is sign of Alzheimer's. >> Some studies say that frequent vivid night mares is a sign for Alzheimer’s disease. Other researchers insist that to remember dream is good for improvement of memory. >> Other researchers insist that to remember a dream is good for the improvement of our memory. I confused which I should believe. >> I’m confused on what to believe. Once in a while, I had a good dream. >> Once in a while, I have a good dream. I was Harry Potter in this dream and I flied sky with broom. >> I was Harry Potter in this dream and I flew in the sky with a broom. However I wasn't happy forever. >> However, it didn’t give me a lasting happiness. It was rainstorm and suddenly I forgot how to use magic. >> It was rainstorm and suddenly I forgot how to use the magic. I became embarrassing and scared and then I woke up. >> I was so embarrassed and scared and then I woke up. I want to sleep without any dreams whether it is good or not. >> Correct

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