Dream

Every day moring,I wake up thanks for alarm. And ready for class. 15 minutes later,I can speak with teacher.Dona. But today,I egnored that alarm's ringing and slept again. It was short time,though I had a dream. In the dream,I spoke with Dona.I can't remember what we say because the class has finished now.I was seeing the clock,it was 7:28am.I'm so suprised.'Am I had the class for 13 minutes? Wow.'And I woke up by reall phone call from dona.

Hello [이름]! This was a quick one. Thank you for finding time in writing this essay. I guess your dream means that you really like Phone English. Thanks again for writing this! Keep writing. Here are my comments: --Teacher Donna--   Every day moring,I wake up thanks for alarm. >> Every morning/(Every day), I wake up. Thanks for the alarm, I can be ready for class. And ready for class. 15 minutes later,I can speak with teacher.Dona. >> Fifteen minutes later, I can speak with teacher Donna. (Be careful with extra periods and spelling)But today,I egnored that alarm's ringing and slept again. >>Correct. (Spelling: ignored) It was short time,though I had a dream. >> Correct. (Remove the comma between 뱓ime?and 뱓hough? In the dream,I spoke with Dona. >> Correct (Spelling: Donna) I can't remember what we say because the class has finished now. >> I can't remember what we said because the class has finished now. I was seeing the clock,it was 7:28am. >> I saw the clock, it was 7:28am. (Use simple past tense) I'm so suprised. >> Correct. (Spelling: surprised) 'Am I had the class for 13 minutes? >> Did I have the class for 13 minutes?? Wow. >> Correct. 'And I woke up by reall phone call from dona. >>And I woke up by the real phone call from Donna.