dream
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When the children were young I used to have nightmares.
I`m still drea[이름]g when I wake up I can`t remember.
Is drea[이름]g of getting older, too?
When the children were young it`s seems had a nightmare because of the concern for the children.
Children are often hurt and sick.
I don`t think I`m having nightmares now when they have grown up.
I want to dream only a good dream from now on.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Great job on doing your homework. Keep up the good work.
-T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> I\'m still drea[이름]g but when I wake up I can\'t remember my dream.
>> Is drea[이름]g gone when you get older too?
>> When the children were young, it\'s seems like I am always having a nightmare because I\'m worried about the children.
>> CORRECT
I don`t think I`m having nightmares now when they have grown up.
>>I don\'t think I\'m having nightmares now that they have grown up.
>> I want to have good dream from now on.
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