Dream car.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hellow Gabby.
It\'s sunny today here. How is the weather today there?
I slept to late in this morning at 10.
I went to the mountain with my husband yesterday afternoon.
I got some lettuses and peppers from a good neighbor on the way down.
What did you do today?
I like Audi cars. But having cars my family are HunDae cars.
I started playing golf about 15 years before.
I was invited at TaeKwang Country Club by Audi\'s president with my husband.
We members were Korean Audi presedent, German Audi Korea president and my husband.
I admir their manners. From thae times I liked Audi cars.
I was taken a great benefit.
I became to like the Audi cars in such human relations.
I can\'t have the Audi car which is expensive.
And we have the 3 cars. As the word it, it is my dream car.
I have not a my job and I need nit my car specially too.
We have to pay more the tax if I have my car.
I am had some slight consolation from the reasons.
See you tomorrow. Gabby.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great work! Keep it up. :)
- T. Gabby :)
Hellow Gabby.
>> Hello Gabby!
It\'s sunny today here.
It\'s sunny today here.
>> It\'s sunny here today.
How is the weather today there?
>> How is the weather there today?
I slept to late in this morning at 10.
>> I slept late so I woke up at 10am this morning.
I went to the mountain with my husband yesterday afternoon.
I went to the mountain with my husband yesterday afternoon.
>> Correct.
I got some lettuses and peppers from a good neighbor on the way down.
I got some lettuses and peppers from a good neighbor on the way down.
>> I got some lettuce and peppers from a good neighbor on the way home.
What did you do today?
What did you do today?
>> Correct.
I like Audi cars. But having cars my family are HunDae cars.
I like Audi cars. But having cars my family are HunDae cars.
>> I like Audi cars but my family cars are HunDae.
I started playing golf about 15 years before.
I started playing golf about 15 years before.
>> I started playing golf about 15 years ago.
I was invited at TaeKwang Country Club by Audi\'s president with my husband.
I was invited at TaeKwang Country Club by Audi\'s president with my husband.
>> Correct.
We members were Korean Audi presedent, German Audi Korea president and my husband.
We members were Korean Audi presedent, German Audi Korea president and my husband.
>> We are members of Korean Audi President. The German Audi Korean President and my husband.
I admir their manners. From thae times I liked Audi cars.
I admir their manners. From thae times I liked Audi cars.
>> I liked their manners. From that time, I started liking Audi cars.
I was taken a great benefit.
I was taken a great benefit.
>> It has a lot of benefits.
I became to like the Audi cars in such human relations.
I became to like the Audi cars in such human relations.
>> I liked it because of human relations.
I can\'t have the Audi car which is expensive.
I can\'t have the Audi car which is expensive.
>> I can\'t have the Audi car because it is expensive.
And we have the 3 cars. As the word it, it is my dream car.
And we have the 3 cars. As the word it, it is my dream car.
>> We already have 3 cars. It\'s my dream car.
I have not a my job and I need nit my car specially too.
I have not a my job and I need nit my car specially too.
>> I don\'t have my job so I don\'t need it for now.
We have to pay more the tax if I have my car.
We have to pay more the tax if I have my car.
>> Correct.
I am had some slight consolation from the reasons.
I am had some slight consolation from the reasons.
>> I am having some slight consolation for that reason.
See you tomorrow. Gabby.
See you tomorrow. Gabby.
>> Correct.
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