Dream comes true !!

2014-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I will exactly buy Samsung stocks. because it's very expensive more than past. Today many people are using cellphone made in Samsung. that is why buy Samsung stocks. Samsung stocks is being expensive more. (??) and than, i'll be the rich. hahaha ~~~ >_< When i be the rich, i'll go travel around world with my family ! Thank you teacher, Becca ! ps.why don't you attend in our class at today night ? i wondering that reason (?)~~~~~~~~ ^0^ kkk

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Ashley!   Thanks for sending in your homework :) I\'m sorry if I was not able to attend the class yesterday. I got sick. kkkk But I am well now. Thank you ^^ Looking forward to see you later :)   ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections, dear:   I will exactly buy Samsung stocks. >> I will definitely buy Samsung stocks.because it\'s very expensive more than past. >> Because nowadays, it is very expensive compared to it\'s price in the past.Today many people are using cellphone made in Samsung. >> Today, many people are using Samsung cellphones. >> OR: Today, many people are using cellphones produced by Samsung.that is why buy Samsung stocks. >> That is why I want to buy Samsung stocks.Samsung stocks is being expensive more. (??) >> Samsung stocks are getting more and more expensive.and than, i\'ll be the rich. hahaha ~~~ >_< >> And then, I will be rich. Hahaha!When i be the rich, i\'ll go travel around world with my family !>> When I become rich,  I will travel around the world with my family.Thank you teacher, Becca !>> Thank you, teacher Becca!ps.why don\'t you attend in our class at today night ? >> P.S, Why didn\'t you attend our class tonight?i wondering that reason (?)~~~~~~~~ ^0^ kkk >> I wonder why. kkkk  

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