Dream girls.

2011-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I am listening to music which is in the "Dream Girls" O.S.T on radio. I am facinated with Beyonce's voice. She have both beauty and fantastic voice. Can you sing a song pretty well? In my case, unfortunately every my boyfreinds told me "You are a bad singer." huhuhu But It's okay because it's true and love is one thing honesty is another. well...let me see I can find someting that I can pretty well. oh!! I have one thing. I am a great story teller. Everyone attention to me when I tell other people a funny story. I can tell a speach of soap drama correctly. How about this? Isn' it cool?

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Hi J! to answer your question, yes I do sig sometimes but I can't say that I am a good singer. ^^ Don't fell bad if you are not a good singer. Everyone have their unique gifts, like for you you are not a good singer but you are a good story teller. How about that? ^^ You have great sentences here. Keep it up!! Lei J   I am listening to music which is in the "Dream Girls" O.S.T on radio. >>correct I am fascinated  with Beyonce's voice.. >>correct She have both beauty and fantastic voice. >>correct Can you sing a song pretty well? >>correct In my case, unfortunately every my boyfreinds told me >>Unfortunately, for my case even my boyfriend tells me. "You are a bad singer." huhuhu >>correct But It's okay because it's true and love is one thing honesty is another. >>correct well...let me see I can find someting that I can pretty well. >>well, let me tell you about something I can do pretty well. oh!! I have one thing. >>correct I am a great story teller. >>correct Everyone attention to me when I tell other people a funny story. >>Everybody gives their attention to me when I share a funny story. I can tell a speach of soap drama correctly. >>I can relay a soap drama line correctly. How abou this? Isn' it cool? >>correct

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