Dream girls.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am listening to music which is in the "Dream Girls" O.S.T on radio.
I am facinated with Beyonce's voice.
She have both beauty and fantastic voice.
Can you sing a song pretty well?
In my case, unfortunately every my boyfreinds told me
"You are a bad singer." huhuhu
But It's okay because it's true
and love is one thing honesty is another.
well...let me see I can find someting that I can pretty well.
oh!! I have one thing.
I am a great story teller.
Everyone attention to me when I tell other people a funny story.
I can tell a speach of soap drama correctly.
How about this? Isn' it cool?
강사 첨삭
Hi J! to answer your question, yes I do sig sometimes but I can't say that I am a good singer. ^^ Don't fell bad if you are not a good singer. Everyone have their unique gifts, like for you you are not a good singer but you are a good story teller. How about that? ^^ You have great sentences here. Keep it up!!
Lei J
I am listening to music which is in the "Dream Girls" O.S.T on radio.
>>correct
I am fascinated with Beyonce's voice..
>>correct
She have both beauty and fantastic voice.
>>correct
Can you sing a song pretty well?
>>correct
In my case, unfortunately every my boyfreinds told me
>>Unfortunately, for my case even my boyfriend tells me.
"You are a bad singer." huhuhu
>>correct
But It's okay because it's true and love is one thing honesty is another.
>>correct
well...let me see I can find someting that I can pretty well.
>>well, let me tell you about something I can do pretty well.
oh!! I have one thing.
>>correct
I am a great story teller.
>>correct
Everyone attention to me when I tell other people a funny story.
>>Everybody gives their attention to me when I share a funny story.
I can tell a speach of soap drama correctly.
>>I can relay a soap drama line correctly.
How abou this? Isn' it cool?
>>correct
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