“Dream” shoes!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
My \"dream\" shoes right now are the Converse Highs. The Converse Highs covers my ankles because the shoes are high, and the colors are various. They look like shoes that go well with school uniforms.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
My \"dream\" shoes right now are the Converse Highs.
>>> CORRECT!
The Converse Highs covers my ankles because the shoes are high, and the colors are various.
>>> The Converse Highs cover my ankles because the shoes are high, and the colors are various.
They look like shoes that go well with school uniforms.
>>> CORRECT!
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