Dream vacation

2010-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Dream vacation I didn't know how I understood about meaning of vacation. Vacation has two means, like not to go to school, long summer or winter vacation and like holiday, to go on a trip or take a rest in short period, sometimes It can become long. At first I understood summer vacation in college. but through time, I think that maybe vacation what you say means holiday, special vacation. So I write about my dream holiday, from now on. I dreamed of a trip, like other city, beach, abroad. I'm going to other city in Korea with my boy friend, and I'm going to country, my parents' hometown with my family. I really want to go to abroad. I need much money and nice stamina to go on a trip. I gave up to go on a trip in this year. But I hope I'll go on a trip in oversea next year.

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Hi [이름], This is such a nice vacation plan considering your boyfriend and your family.  I like it. I love nature so that is a dream vacation for me. Going to any place with a beautiful sight. JOB WELL DONE [이름] (^_^) Stay safe, Teacher Connie   Dream vacationI didn't know how I understood about meaning of vacation. >> I don’t know how I will interpret vacation. Vacation has two means, like not to go to school, long summer or winter  vacation and like holiday, to go on a trip or take a rest in short period, sometimes It can become long. >> Vacation has two meanings, first is not going to school, long summer or winter vacation and holidays , second is going on a trip or take a rest in a short period of time that sometimes can be extended. At first I understood summer vacation in college. but through time, I think that maybe vacation what you say means holiday, special vacation. >> At first, what I understood is like a summer vacation in college but through time,  I realized that maybe you are talking about a holiday or a special vacation. So I write about my dream holiday, from now on. >> Correct >> So, I’m writing about my dream holiday. - betterI dreamed of a trip, like other city, beach, abroad. >> I am dreaming of a trip to other cities or beaches abroad. I'm going to other city in Korea with my boy friend, and I'm going to country, my parents' hometown with my family. >> With my boyfriend, we’ll travel around the cities in Korea  and with my parents we’ll go to other countries.  I really want to go to abroad. >> I really want to go abroad.  I need much money and nice stamina to go on a trip. >> Correct I gave up to go on a trip in this year. >> I gave up going on a trip this year. But I hope I'll go on a trip in oversea next year. >> However I’m hoping to go overseas next year.

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