Dream vacation
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Dream vacation
I didn't know how I understood about meaning of vacation. Vacation has two means, like not to go to school, long summer or winter vacation and like holiday, to go on a trip or take a rest in short period, sometimes It can become long. At first I understood summer vacation in college. but through time, I think that maybe vacation what you say means holiday, special vacation. So I write about my dream holiday, from now on.
I dreamed of a trip, like other city, beach, abroad. I'm going to other city in Korea with my boy friend, and I'm going to country, my parents' hometown with my family. I really want to go to abroad. I need much money and nice stamina to go on a trip. I gave up to go on a trip in this year. But I hope I'll go on a trip in oversea next year.
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Hi [이름],
This is such a nice vacation plan considering your boyfriend and your family.
I like it. I love nature so that is a dream vacation for me. Going to any place with a beautiful sight.
JOB WELL DONE [이름] (^_^)
Stay safe,
Teacher Connie
Dream vacationI didn't know how I understood about meaning of vacation.
>> I don’t know how I will interpret vacation.
Vacation has two means, like not to go to school, long summer or winter
vacation and like holiday, to go on a trip or take a rest in short period, sometimes It can become long.
>> Vacation has two meanings, first is not going to school, long summer
or winter vacation and holidays , second is going on a trip or take a rest
in a short period of time that sometimes can be extended.
At first I understood summer vacation in college. but through time, I think
that maybe vacation what you say means holiday, special vacation.
>> At first, what I understood is like a summer vacation in college but through time,
I realized that maybe you are talking about a holiday or a special vacation.
So I write about my dream holiday, from now on.
>> Correct
>> So, I’m writing about my dream holiday. - betterI dreamed of a trip, like other city, beach, abroad.
>> I am dreaming of a trip to other cities or beaches abroad.
I'm going to other city in Korea with my boy friend, and I'm
going to country, my parents' hometown with my family.
>> With my boyfriend, we’ll travel around the cities in Korea
and with my parents we’ll go to other countries.
I really want to go to abroad.
>> I really want to go abroad.
I need much money and nice stamina to go on a trip.
>> Correct
I gave up to go on a trip in this year.
>> I gave up going on a trip this year.
But I hope I'll go on a trip in oversea next year.
>> However I’m hoping to go overseas next year.
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