Dreamgirls
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite english movie is Dreamgirls.
The main acter is Beyonce, my favorite and love
She is perfect. act, sing, dance everything.
The story is black music history.
Story is very interested and it is musical movie.
That\'s why I love it.
OST it\'s perfect too.
Every actor is good at sing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I\'ve never seen that movie before. It caught my attention now based on how you described it. I\'m going to watch it hehe.
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My favorite english movie is Dreamgirls.
>> My favorite English movie is \"Dream girls\".
The main acter is Beyonce, my favorite and love
>> The main actress here is Beyonce, my favorite singer.
She is perfect. act, sing, dance everything.
>> She is perfect in everything; acting, singing, and dancing.
The story is black music history.
>> The story is about black music history.
Story is very interested and it is musical movie.
>> The story is very interesting. It is also a musical.
That\'s why I love it.
>> CORRECT
OST it\'s perfect too.
>> It\'s OST is perfect too.
Every actor is good at sing.
>> Every actor is good at singing.
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