Dreams come true.

2012-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Write a paragraph in not more than 10 sentences about your greatest dream in life and what will you do fulfill this dream. My dream is to be an English teacher. Because my behavior and attitude are obviously respectable for my students. So I want to train my students not as a talented but thoughtful person. If I become a teacher, I will travel many countries to make precious memories in which my students will be interested. With those memories, I will modify my lessons in order to motivate my students to learn English. I can't wait to be a teacher. I exactly know where I stand. It means that it is still hard to be, but I definitely know how to go. That's all, just consistently, steadily, and ambitiously.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for making your homework. I am happy to have received and read it. Anyway, I think you are really very passionate in becoming a teacher. It's really good to know that because the world needs a lot of dedicated teachers nowadays. Keep it up! Reach yourt dreams and be the teacher you always wanted to be. See you in class! -T. Chloe- Write a paragraph in not more than 10 sentences about your greatest dream in life and what will you do fulfill this dream.My dream is to be an English teacher. >>Correct.Because my behavior and attitude are obviously respectable for my students. >>It's because my behavior and attitude are obviously respectable for my students.So I want to train my students not as a talented but thoughtful person. >> So, I want to train my students not to be talented but to be thoughtful people.If I become a teacher, I will travel many countries to make precious memories in which my students will be interested. >> If I become a teacher, I will travel in many countries to make precious memories in which my students will be interested.With those memories, I will modify my lessons in order to motivate my students to learn English. >> Correct.I can\'t wait to be a teacher. >> Correct.I exactly know where I stand. >> Correct.It means that it is still hard to be, but I definitely know how to go. >>Correct. Or >> It means that it is still hard to be one, but I definitely know how to reach it.That\'s all, just consistently, steadily, and ambitiously. >>That's all. Consistent, steady and ambitious.

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