Dreams Play A Big Role in My Life
학생이 쓴 원문
I totally believe dreams have a special meaning. First, I experienced a dream that had an effect on my real life. It wasn\'t my dream, but my mother dreamed that lots of moths came out of my mouth. The following day, I had an examination in science and I didn\'t get good grades. Some might says it occurred because I didn\'t prepare the test thoroughly. That\'s as maybe, but my family started to believe the content of dreams after that day. Second, I can simulate the situation that can happen in real life vividly. There is a saying when you imagine something vividly, the likelihood of that happening gets higher. Therefore, if there is something important schedule on the next day, I can visualize the scene and be ready for it. Lastly, dreams allow me to give my imagination full play by thinking every unrealistic thing. In conclusion, dreams play a big role in my life: foreshadowing outcome, enabling to conceive a particular scene, and exercising my imagination.
강사 첨삭
That\'s quite interesting, Su [이름]. :o
And awesome too!
Dreams are so amazing, but could also be terrifying sometimes.
~t. Ally
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I totally believe dreams have a special meaning.
>> CORRECT!
First, I experienced a dream that had an effect on my real life.
>> CORRECT!
It wasn\'t my dream, but my mother dreamed that lots of moths came out of my mouth.
>> CORRECT!
The following day, I had an examination in science and I didn\'t get good grades.
>> CORRECT!
Some might says it occurred because I didn\'t prepare the test thoroughly.
>> CORRECT!
That\'s as maybe, but my family started to believe the content of dreams after that day.
>> CORRECT!
Second, I can simulate the situation that can happen in real life vividly.
>> CORRECT!
There is a saying when you imagine something vividly, the likelihood of that happening gets higher.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, if there is something important schedule on the next day, I can visualize the scene and be ready for it.
>> Therefore, if there is an important schedule on the next day, I can visualize the scene and be ready for it.
Lastly, dreams allow me to give my imagination full play by thinking every unrealistic thing.
>> Lastly, dreams allow me to give my imagination play in full by thinking every unrealistic thing.
In conclusion, dreams play a big role in my life: foreshadowing outcome, enabling to conceive a particular scene, and exercising my imagination.
>> CORRECT!
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